Score: 9

"Pretty colors!!!"

submission: SketchPad 1.0

date: October 9, 2008

-was reading some of the other review- o.0 riiiiiiight....
Nice work, I hadn't seen an online drawing app made on flash, all the painters Ive used are java. Very nice for a first entry, could use a bigger grid tho, zoom may be?.
I also think I found a bug, when you lower the transparency but remain on thickness 1 nothing happens, you have to change the thickness then get it back to 1 so that you can alter the transparency.
On usability: very good tool placement, and nice thinking of it to hid.
Some people down there say it's no different from MSpaint, except of cours mspaint messes around with the pixels while thankgod flash interprets as vectors so, no, its not the same. Tho you could include some wat to save your drawing somewhere and a place within the same game to watch other's stuff. That would probably shut up those guys and certainly make me very happy XD!

Nice going ^^

-Ku

Score: 10

"@ munchy365"

submission: We Are NativeAmericanCats

date: October 8, 2008

Oh, I dunno, may be it's because some alien hacker removed the animation and replaced it with a nasty message... yah, Im sure that's the reason... -.-

Score: 1

"I see..."

submission: The Five Rules of Fun-Fun

date: October 9, 2006

I can see good detail in the background, may be you could try and give it to your principals too. Research the plot, look for something bigger. You have animation skills that you can work on. Just give it time... and loads of practice.

Score: 7

"Nice"

submission: the bride of reanimator

date: October 9, 2006

I liked this movie, tho there are still some things you could improve, as typography you use. It has a good sound control and effects, something very important that people just seem to miss. You didnt.
And give a little check to the graphics, even if it's your style, dont overuse it.

Score: 10

"Love"

submission: There she is!! step 2

date: October 9, 2006

Just as "There she is" I cant say anything bad about it, nor even mark a mistake, you guys Rule!

Score: 10

"OMG"

submission: There she is!!!

date: October 9, 2006

I cant really say anything about this one, it's jus one of the best movies I've seen. I love it since the first time I saw it. Good graphics, awesome animation, perfect sound sync, everything.

Score: 2

"Something to think about"

submission: darkside on halloween

date: October 9, 2006

Good animation work, its a shame that you keep that level of graphics.
When using bottons to make the plot remember to put them in the same place, else it will be difficult for the player to find it each time.
And for designer's god's sake! dont change your fonts each time you write something!!! It gets annnoying, and it will give a much better presentation if you keep the same font. Finally, try to experiment wth more than three colors, background is way too simple and the contrast with orange... Try using combinations.

Score: 1

"Not the kind of humor I would laugh about"

submission: Fun With Clown

date: October 9, 2006

You should review some things, aside from putting a little more effort in graphics. First of all, try a little more sophisticated plot. I have nithing against clowns that blow up stuff but you could try harder. Second, you tried to divide your screen in rooms but failed a little, may be try to divide space without using the middle of the Scenary as a reference, or may be something more than a wall for the room.
Music... Try searching for something that could fit better. Even if you try to make it look innocent, may be changing the last half of the animation, when the guy is going to open the door to some metal stuff. And graphics again at the end of the movie, may be a shape tween or something that could tell us that the background is the destroyed room. it doesnt seem like it.
I hope this helps.

Score: 4

"Details"

submission: Matrice Angelique

date: October 9, 2006

I see you may work something neat out of here. But please check upon:
Typography. It means what type of fonts you use. You did preety well with some, as when you used serif fonts, but try not to abuse the graphic style, its hard to read and should NOT be used as much as you do.
Also check the font colors, you tend to use primary colors or dark red. Primary colors are great: When NOT used toguether. And dark red may be elegant, but will make your design as poor as a rock if you over use it.
Just try to balance this colors and sizes. I also saw a little problems with how long the letters stayed in scene, make sure that everyone will be able to read your text in time before it fades away, and be careful to make all the texts fade in and out the same way, it will grant you presentation. Little details that can make your presentation increase it's visual attractive.
I like your graphic style.

Score: 8

"Uh.. This was a not so common animation..."

submission: Dad's Home

date: October 9, 2006

o.oU I have to say you arent bad at all when animating, I guess I could have gone lower wit graphics but may be that kind of drawing was what you needed to let it be a good animation. Even if the story behind it keeps... Intriguing me... It made me laugh, I just hope my head doesnt catch on fire in the future.

Made me remember my dad when he was young... o.o